Shannon, These have some good qualities. The gesture in some of these is good and the line variety is solid. I also like that you have captured some detail in the longer poses. Try to make your marks with more confidence. You might try to describe a contour that is longer and more elegant than with shorter marks - it allows you to arrive at a blocked out form faster, allowing you to use darker marks to finish the drawing.
Shannon,
ReplyDeleteThese have some good qualities. The gesture in some of these is good and the line variety is solid. I also like that you have captured some detail in the longer poses.
Try to make your marks with more confidence. You might try to describe a contour that is longer and more elegant than with shorter marks - it allows you to arrive at a blocked out form faster, allowing you to use darker marks to finish the drawing.