I LOVE page one, it really gives me the sense that I'm at the library. The two figures on the upper left hand corner are just beautiful. I would enjoy seeing you play around with your style some more.
Shannon, You captured a good variety of gestures seen at the library. The drawings where you incorporate surroundings are the strongest. Continue to work on hands and feet. The hands here are obscured and the feet look rubbery. If it takes a sharper line or creating a mark that describes the sole or open toe, go ahead. The first page has the best gestures, where weight shift is taking place. Look in this direction when deciding what pose to draw.
I LOVE page one, it really gives me the sense that I'm at the library. The two figures on the upper left hand corner are just beautiful. I would enjoy seeing you play around with your style some more.
ReplyDeleteShannon,
ReplyDeleteYou captured a good variety of gestures seen at the library. The drawings where you incorporate surroundings are the strongest.
Continue to work on hands and feet. The hands here are obscured and the feet look rubbery. If it takes a sharper line or creating a mark that describes the sole or open toe, go ahead.
The first page has the best gestures, where weight shift is taking place. Look in this direction when deciding what pose to draw.
Good work.