Shannon I like your stylization/simplification of your forms, my fav has to be on you first page bottom right. The line from her head to the bottom of her pant leg is long,loose, and flowy I love it.
Shannon, David makes a great point - the drawings on the first page are beautifully active and fluid. When capturing the figure in motion, try to take this approach. The later drawings have nice qualities, as well, but the poses seem to stiffen - sometimes due to the choice of pose, but sometimes because you refine the line and try to 'finish' the drawing too much. Stay loose! Good work.
Shannon I like your stylization/simplification of your forms, my fav has to be on you first page bottom right. The line from her head to the bottom of her pant leg is long,loose, and flowy I love it.
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ReplyDeleteDavid makes a great point - the drawings on the first page are beautifully active and fluid. When capturing the figure in motion, try to take this approach. The later drawings have nice qualities, as well, but the poses seem to stiffen - sometimes due to the choice of pose, but sometimes because you refine the line and try to 'finish' the drawing too much.
Stay loose! Good work.
Watch your proportions!
ReplyDeleteI like how pointy these are. They seem to show direction which always implies "motion". Good twist! :)
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